05 Jun 15
05 Jul 15 1:09 pm
Which Squeeze Page Headline Is Better?
Hi all, I am doing a squeeze page for the women relationship advice niche and I would appreciate if I can receive some feedback on my headlines.
"DISCOVER The 7 Simple Steps Thousands Of Women Are Using To Get Their Men To Fall Uncontrollably In Love... Even When You Have Been Together For A Long Time..."
"Do You Have The Loving Relationship You Know You Deserve? If Not, Then You Need To Know The 7 Simple Steps Thousands Of Women Are Using To Get Their Men To Fall Hopelessly In Love."
The first headline was written by a male and I was told it was too masculine. The second headline was written from a female's perspective. However my female friends preferred the first headline.
Would appreciate some opinions here, especially the female ones!