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Review My Website Please!

weemde
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Review My Website Please!

Hi everybody,

I'm building a website. Can I please ask for a review of weightlosspoundsblog.com
Thanks!
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Last edited by michellerana on 11 Nov 09 9:52 am, edited 1 time in total.
 

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wollowra
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Hi,
Your site took about 40 seconds to load, that is not very good as most people will click off.
Also the English punctuation is very poor and does not read well and the whole site looks like you are trying to sell me something. Also, in December you will need to place text on your site saying you are an affiliate and make money off the site by promoting products.

I think you would benefit from Marks Affiloblueprint course.

Have a look http://www.affilorama.com/affiloblueprint?aff=wollowra if you want to learn how Mark suggests members build sites,

Regards
Troy
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sandra72
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The site took a while to load on my computer also.

I would recommend changing the by line from admin to your name or a pen name. I'm sorry I have to agree, the English does not read well. If it's not your native language, try hiring a ghostwriter to help out. I've found several great writers on elance.
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weemde
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Sorry, I cannot outsource my content because I do not have the money. Maybe next time. Thanks for the advice.
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