Joined: 01 Jun 09
26 Apr 10 1:10 pm
Okay, here goes...
In as far as copy is concerned, it's alright.
But the voice on the video is not exactly one that I would like listening to. It's tinny and does not really inspire confidence.
You will also want to provide a @goldenbusinesssuccessandsolutions.com support email address instead of using gmail.
And it would be best to use your company name on the Paypal payment page instead of firstname.lastname@example.org
Also use a contact form instead of launching the yahoo mail or gmail sites when the contact us link is clicked.