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crystal01
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23 Apr 10 12:23 pm

Please review: www.goldenbusinesssuccessandsolutions.com

Hi lovely people,

This site does not follow the affiloblueprint layout. However, it is something that Mark Ling highly recommended a couple of weeks ago.

Hours were spent to learn new tasks and avoid duplicate content. Google and Dmoz were notified of the new site. An ezine article is awaiting approval. Applications for listing have been placed with free directories.

I am not sure that additional on page SEO can be completed.

Would you please review the site and put forward your opinions and suggestions.

http://www.goldenbusinesssuccessandsolutions.com/

To your success,

Crystal
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faradina
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26 Apr 10 1:10 pm

 Okay, here goes...
In as far as copy is concerned, it's alright.
But the voice on the video is not exactly one that I would like listening to. It's tinny and does not really inspire confidence.
You will also want to provide a @goldenbusinesssuccessandsolutions.com support email address instead of using gmail.
And it would be best to use your company name on the Paypal payment page instead of [email protected]
Also use a contact form instead of launching the yahoo mail or gmail sites when the contact us link is clicked.
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26 Apr 10 3:25 pm

 Hi Fara,

Thanks for the valuable input.

I will most certainly try to work out those problems. However, I can't do anything about the voice in the video. I don't know why the carib email address is on the payment form.

I will go back to the drawing table.

Cheers,

Crystal

http://www.goldenbusinesssuccessandsolutions.com/
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28 Apr 10 8:01 am

 Hi Fara.

I just typed http://www.goldenbusinesssuccessandsolutions.com into Google Australia. After, possbily less than a week of being published, http://www.goldenbusinesssuccessandsolutions.com has been indexed.

Also the keyword , for the site - at the time the search was run - was sitting at number nine of 46,200,000 results. I am told that this is the norm though so I won't get too excited. Hopefully, http://www.goldenbusinesssuccessandsolutions.com will remain on page one.

I have not had an opportunity to make the changes yet - I know that a couple cannot be made (for example, the voice on the video) - but, hopefully, I will find time to start on them tonight.

Thanks for your help, Fara.

Thank you Mark for highly recommending this as such a good product. Hopefully, I can start earning an income now.
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crystal01
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02 May 10 5:27 am

 wow!!! I am in a state of total disbelief. I thought that you had to pay to have yahoo index your sites but this site is ranked on the first page for its keyword without yahoo having received a cent. You learn something new every day in this business, which is good because it makes things so much more interesting.
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