25 Feb 11
02 Sep 15 9:24 am
I visited each of your site and the issue I found in all three is the quality of the articles. They simply don't make sense. Much of the confusion comes from an abundance of unnecessary punctuation marks.
I suggest you go over your articles and re-write them, making sure that you limit punctuation marks. Check any grammatical errors and observe correct word usage. You might want to hire a professional to edit/re-write these articles for you.
Another common issue is that these are sub-domain sites. Are you certain that you can promote affiliate offers or products on these domains? I know Blogspot allows AdSense ads, but I don't think they approve affiliate offers.
Hope that helps. Have a good day!