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sallykamara2
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Please Review My Site : http://www.salamatukamara.com

Hi all

I am new to online marketing and affilorama. I have a website that I recently created just to start something due to much research and careful consideration. I am yet to make any progress after researching and gathering too much information so I decided to start on this website since the topic is personal to me. However I need help and assistance on so many things but the main one I need is the grammar, I do have a list of what I want done and I don't mind paying someone a fee and give access to somebody to my wordpress backend for the rest of the task to be complete.

I would really appreciate if someone could respond to my request as I am really struggling and I need to make a start. I have ideas on other things but I need this tasks to get done first before I can start advertising the site.

The website address is http://www.salamatukamara.com

Regards
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cecille.l
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Hi Sally,

Good job on getting the site up. I am sure that this has not been easy and I appreciate your efforts and honesty in creating and sharing this site for everyone who are in an abusive relationship.

The design and layout of the site could use some tweaking. The header looks cut off, and the design as a whole does not seem to fit the theme. I suggest you find a better-looking theme. An attractive site with a good layout helps to invite readers to go into the site and see what it has to offer.

Your articles do need some proofreading. Your site would also benefit from having additional articles added to it. I suggest you look at Affilorama Services. There are Affilorama members who offer writing and proofing services.

Disclaimer: I am not endorsing or recommending the services on this thread. I have no personal experience with these services yet so I can not make any statement for or against them. I simply wanted you to know what is available. I recommend that you do proper research and try to ask feedback from other members.


Hope that helps. Have a good day!
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tankctrlr
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Can you write your content in your native language? Or are you trying to focus on English speaking audiences. I have always wondered why more people don't target their own language, it would be much easier I think, to rank in google.

You can get proof reading done at places like www.fiverr.com, but really if English is what you want to write your content in, you should invest in yourself and get some lessons or get a good book to perfect your writing with.
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sallykamara2
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Hi Cecille

Thanks for your suggestions, I really appreciate your feedback and I have been looking at options to improve the writing, layouts and format which I am aware of. I tired uploading the Affilorama theme which I purchase however its not allowing me to do so. I am still doing research in trying to find other information that will work and its hard to chose what is right.

As for the other suggestions I will look into it.

Once again thank you.
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sallykamara2
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Hi Andrew

Thanks for your input and I am still in progress of working on the site. I did looked at Fiverr and I had someone in mind but I am trying to understand things as I do not want to invest my money in something that I would not get the benefit of.

Writing in my own native language would be ideal as I can write it however the audience I am writing for are in English Language and mostly in the UK. I am also aware of the grammar which is something I noticed is one of my weakness and I am working towards improving that.

Thanks
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