Joined: 13 Feb 12
06 Dec 12 9:12 pm
You should also get an English language editor to go over all your text. The grammar is pretty bad and there are many unprofessional English mistakes.
Some code errors are also evident - like HTML codes showing and bad text formatting in spots. Light gray text on a mid gray background (or maybe the text is white) is a poor choice for readability. You should at least make the gray background darker.
You have many large, uninviting blocks of text that need to be broken up with headers or sub-headers, lists, etc. You have done some of this (but they need indents) but you need more. The main page is so long that you should put navigation links at the page top to go to the different sections and "Back to Top..." links after each section.
Hope this helps....