24 Nov 09
09 Jul 11 1:19 pm
The white on black is hard for us older people to read.
There is really no "hook" to grab my attention to get me to start reading. My eyes kinda when all over the place trying to find a starting point.
I know you want to showcase one of your designs, but I would advertise your service with a sales letter.
Something like this http://www.topecovers.com
You could showcase some of your designs as the reader goes down the page like this guy does with his ebook covers.
Honestly I hope you find work, you have a lot of compition from overseas. People who earn a week what you would hope to earn in an hour.
Then there are the auto site builders like http://homestead.com