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Need feedback on first landing page.

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mjalinsky
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Need feedback on first landing page.

Hey Everyone,

So I am still learning, but trying to take action.

My friend asked me if I could help him with drive some leads to his company and would pay me for each attendant, up front and residuals of each member that signs up.

I thought a video sales letter on the page was a good idea, I am already in the works of a better sales letter, it was my first one. Really wanted that software, but couldn't afford 2k.

what do you think about the set up?


The URL is : www.MortgageDomination.com

O dear, here we go.
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cecille.l
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Hi mjalinsky,

Good job on the landing page! It looks great. It's layout is neat; there are no distractions that can take the user's attention away from the sales video. I would have preferred just a bit more info about the product, but I suppose that's how it's supposed to be as you need them to sign up.

Hope that helps. Have a good day!
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mjalinsky
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Hey Thanks, that's great to hear! Yea, I couldn't give to much over the VSL, but If I was selling something on the page I defiantly would have.

Thanks for the input.
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jcdean
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I like it too, nice work. best of luck.
I don't really understand what you are promoting but assume your prospects will.
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Respect,
J.C. Dean
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gregc2001
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Great looking landing page good job really like the layout good luck
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affiliate6
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I checked out your site but it seems to be down. It gives an error.
Site disabled.
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http://elifejump.com is my main home page. My business is about giving good information on how to make money online.
 

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