10 Nov 06 6:41 pm
To Revimp, Congrats on your first site!
Congrats on getting your first site up and making your first sale... that's great!
I saw your post in Moonman's thread and didn't want to hijack his so I started this one, hope you don't mind.
I know first hand how frustrating it is trying to figure out how to makes things work so I just wanted to give you some feedback :D I'm sure Mark will be along with some great advice but in the meantime, I'll give you my perspective from a vistor's point of view...
revimp wrote:I am very happy for anyone who is doing well, but I am frustrated also. I have been doing this for a while and I have only made 1 sale of affilorama.I think I have a good site,I have a good page i think about affilorama and other affiliates.Can you share some of what you are doing so I can get an idea of what i am not doing right?
So I took a quick look at your site and you've done a nice job, keep it up! What I noticed immediately were some things on your pop up...
First a misspelling, search engion expet
and "seo elite" should be capitalized, Seo Elite
I would reformat the form in an html editor to get a more balanced look. It's kind of hard on the eyes. If you need any help with that, feel free to PM me and IÃ¢â‚¬â„¢ll give you a hand.
Next, you have a list of the chapter headings of the book you're giving away. Rather than including the chapter details, benefits of the chapters might work better. People don't care about facts, they want to know "what's in it for me", in other words, how they'll benefit from your "widget". Just to throw some ideas out there, I might say:
These are some of the profit pulling traffic secrets you'll that you'll learn...
* How changing one single thing on your website can open the floodgates of traffic by boosting your rankings by 350 positions!
* A Guaranteed way to get your website listed in Google in less than 24 hours!
* How to leave your competition in the dust by grabbing the top spot in Google's search results!
* And many more simple, fool-proof and most importantly PROVEN SEO strategies!
I didn't have a whole lot of time to spend on your actual site but I think you're off to a roaring good start :D I think you'll be making money in no time, just keep polishing it up and adding value to your visitor's experience and like Seano6 (in Moonman's thread) said take a look at your traffic, and you'll be golden :D
HTHs just a bit,