28 Apr 09
20 Jun 09 10:39 am
Looks good, but if it was my site would probably make the book a little smaller so your call to action gets in to the first fold or considering your 1st page is based on losing fat perhaps before and after shots of fat ppl that have lost weight with book down the bottom?
For reviews you need to warm the reader up (like you did in the 2nd half of the page) not hit the reader straight away with a cut and paste off the back of the book too salesy. The reviews hit you right between the eyes as just sales pages.
Look at what Mark did in his video on his WoW site he more or less spoke his way through just like he was talking to someone selling features and benefits very subtle. Remember he had star ratings also he sold a few products on the same page. Just some ideas.
Just from my point of view I know there is a lot to take in that is why I value feedback from this site, you just need to tweak it a little bit.
Keep going though nearly there :)