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kepeliki
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Please check out My website!!

I have two website
1. http://wisewaytocash.com
2.http://xbox360helponline.com

I have problem with the 1st one (wisewaytocash.com) it take ages to load. I also need to put an optin as somebody closed the site and optin popout' so I can get more sign up. i have heaps of traffic as only less than 5 months but less optin.

The second one (xbox360) I want to run a questionaire or survey so I can get more optin and also an optin popout things. too.
I have about 12 more unique articles from elance ready to put on but I need to spin it or rewrite it so I can put a copy to ezine or article directory. I have 5 articles from this site on ezine articles and I have few hts from there already. I am thinking of having a newsletter with the otjher articles so I can have some sign up + sale.

Your input will be much appreciated as I am only a newbie and English is my 3rd Language but I thing with your help it will overcome those problems.
Thank you in advance.
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Your first site has WAAAAAY too many ads. I can't even find any actual content on it. I'd guess you have a really high bounce rate because of this.

Your second site is better, but it would look nicer if you worked on the layout. Right now it looks too much like a free-be blogspot blog. You should also make your affiliate links bigger and easier for visitors to find.
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tangoshoes
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I'm going to have to agree with Clayton's comments on this... the second site... needs better colors if not a new layout as Clayton suggested.
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Yep, I agree.
1st site basically looks like you are trying to sell me something as soon as I land on your page and grab my details.
2nd site is a blogger site.. not my first choice of blog platforms but the colors are all wrong in my opinion.
Try to get a white background for your text otherwise it is hard to read.
You need some good content on both sites that offer people value or solves a problem.

Good effort, but needs some work.

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Agreed with what the guys are saying above...all those banners just gave me a major headache, I just wanted to click away and run and grab some aspirin.

In all honesty though, the first site http://wisewaytocash.com, you need to work out what the single most important and profitable action that you want somebody to take and focus on getting rid of everything else.

For instance if you your focus is on list building, then get rid of every single one of those banners and focus on the opt-in. You could also pre-sell it a bit better to make it a no brainer decision for somebody to enter in their details. Think also about adding a bit of value to the site with good helpful content.

One thing you need to remember with "make money" type of sites is that you are dealing with people who have usually been exposed to a lot of banners, marketing ploys and tricks before. So when they come to a Website like this one and they see hundreds of banners, clutter and no valuable content, they will run.

If your looking for an alternative to pop ups to test your opt-ins then try out http://ultimatefooterad.com/ I am having a lot of success with this and I am seeing it being used on many top marketers Websites.

In regards to the second Website there isn't really any need for a comment as you still need to do a lot more work on it and add the content.

Keep on putting in the work you will get there!
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kepeliki
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Thank you guys for all the help so far. I am trying my best to sort out everything.
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I am running a SEO services and I want to improve my site to get more clients. I bought a templates and thinking of using this domain that I have already http://friendlyonlineservices.com for it. Can you please analyse it and share or suggestion.Thank you in advance for everything.
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