19 Jun 09
18 Aug 10 8:38 am
I would have to say, most people interested int the niche have gotten that line spewed to them so many times that they will ignore you. you shouldnt make promises of things outside your control like how fast they will make money. ]
It looks like the same hype and empty promises that dominate the IM niche and screams at me that all you are going to do is rape my wallet.
but as previously stated, Im not your target market.
basically, the layout looks good, but I would tone down the sales pitch. also, so many people over hype their stuff in this niche. you better deliver or 80% of your opt ins will begone before the day 2 message goes out. if all you are giving away is a sales pitch for a product, which is the norm in the IM niche, then you better be careful. those kind of lists tend to not last long especially if you are sending cold leads.
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