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feed back, in exchange for a yacht party

jcdean
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feed back, in exchange for a yacht party

Hey guys

Anyone who helps me out with this will be invited to my yacht party (Once I have one)

I came a crossed some PLR, but unlike most PLR this is actually good. It's from Jimmy D Brown. AKA the Guru to the Gurus.

To make a long story short as possible I am going to launch my own product. Ironically the PLR is about launching your own product. Kinda like a coffee table book about coffee tables.

What I would like my friends here at Affilorama to do is read the ebook and the draft of my sales letter and give me your feed back.

Sales Letter. http://31dayguru.com

Download page http://31dayguru.com/download

O.K. Cool?

Thanks.
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J.C. Dean
http://KillYourDayjob.com
 
samb
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Hi JCDean.... is it james or what?

I had a quick look at your sales letter. You have quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes which would put me off especially as you are selling report writing skills. I always look as the quality of writing. This is also important for me with emails. Also I note your testimonial section is full of latin. I guess this is yet to be filled with real testimonials !

Sounds interesting though....

Good luck,

Ed
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jcdean
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My Name is Dean.;J.C. Dean is my Pen name, from my kids Jacquiline Christina (JC) and Dean Jr.

Thanks, for being kind enough to check out my site for me.

I thought I would recieve alot more feedback; perhaps my anti-affiliate marketing angle is souring people. It is just an angle, perhaps I should tone it down a bit? After all I am going to want affiliates to promote it for me.

I have someone proof reading for me as we speak, I know I am lacking in that department.

The testomonial box is like that on the template I am useing.
I don't have any testomonials yet. Perhaps your's could be the first?
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J.C. Dean
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gradyp
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Hmmm... Might have to "borrow" that technique for one of my niches someday ;)
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